Site Audit: How to write a CLEAR offer that people click

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In this posting, we audited a local website to show how they can write a clear offer on their homepage.

At Website Artisan, we understood the power of messaging. 

and how it can be a differentiator between you and your competitor. 

Often times, we find ourselves writing or explaining our business from our point of view. We make mistakes like:

  • Writing features instead of benefit
  • Not explaining our offering on our homepage
  • Using complex jargon instead that our layman terms 

and to name a few. 

In this video above, you’ll see how we turn this website around by writing a clear offer that allows visitors to understand the business easily.

If you have a website and are struggling with your messaging, request a FREE site audit we’ll go through your website. 

Fitri Joroji

Fitri Joroji

"It doesn't take long for us to realise that the guys holding the microphone aren't necessarily are the guys that are really capable of delivering good products and services. My mission at Website Artisan is to help the good guys like you get hold of the microphone and really make a dent in the world"

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